Decent.
First off, if you aren't confident in a submission, don't submit it. You don't need fans to submit to Newgrounds.
Anyway, here's what I thought.
Graphics: Let's face it. The graphics weren't all too beautiful, however it kind've make sense that they aren't for a flash such as this...
Style: I guess the style was alright. I like the fact that the characters kind've... I don't know how to explain in, but "act how they look."
Sound: Some of it was a bit difficult to understand, but it was still understandable.
Violence: Not sure. I probably shouldn't review a movie that I didn't completely watch, but then again, it was incredibly boring. This just goes to show you that you need something to grab people's attention, or none of them are going to watch it.
Interactivity: None, but not what the flash was about.
Humor: It wasn't outright hillarious, but it was decently funny.
All in all, it was a decently done flash, and I hope that it make it through the portal. Good luck on this submission and submissions later on!
~Tovi~