Tovi-Noname's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The five pillars]

Gets The Point Across.

The Kajj or whatever sounds like a sexual position. Or maybe a drug...

Anyway, very informative. There were a few parts where the audio got too quiet to hear very well, and the animation could have used some work (as could the drawings of the people) but all in all, it was a decent flash. Also, nice work adding subtitles. It made everything far less confusing.

I'm sure your school project went very well.

3/5

~Tovi~

Greenhotflame responds:

I could have done a much better job, but I was REALLY rushed. Thanks for the review.

[The Best Day Ever]

Eh.

Usually the first thing noticed about new flash artists is the choppy movement of the flash. This, however, was not true with this flash. Everything actually moved pretty smoothly, and I was impressed by how well you did with that on your first try.

However, with the video not having sound, everything was kind of boring. It was also lacking in graphics (I understand stickfigures aren't exactly complex, but when the old lady gets hit by a car, it'd be nice to see something more then the guy holding a bloody arm... I mean, the lady just suddenly disapears).

All in all, it wasn't an uber terrible flash, but I think you should concider redoing it, keeping these things in mind. Regardless, keep it up! You'll only get better.

~Tovi~

aerosmith1 responds:

yeah i needed to get this done quickly before i left so i left a few things unpolished.

and i'm planning on spending a while learning to draw things that aren't sticks.

i'm not a good voice actor either so i need to get better so someone will do it for me.

i have an awful mic too

[High School Never Ends]

Bad.

I love Bowling for Soup. This would probably make them cry.

There was pretty much no animation going on, just a bunch of badly drawn pictures.

I would suggest trying to make them a lot more mobile. Take your time with this, and submit a better version with that in mind.

~Tovi~

vincesway responds:

you suck dick, give me some fucking slaqe, go fuck yourself

[Super Mario World Gijinka]

Nice!

I really like the song, but I think my favorite part of the animation is the fact that you made all of the enemies and such human, rather than turtles and dinosaurs and the like.

It was definentaly a neat interpretation of Super Mario. Excellant work!

~Tovi~

Basil-Ovelby responds:

Thank you! I like the song too. XD
And I'm glad you liked my interpretations of them!

[The Sicksons]

ROFL.

Come on people, I don't think this was supposed to be some beautiful work of art. This flash isn't at all complete crap. I mean, at least this one is animated, unlike other flashes that a lot of people submit.

I, myself, though this was pretty damn funny. I mean, it made absolutly no sense, which is one of the reasons it was so great.

Plus, Lisa looked like a freaking monster. Don't even tell me you saw that one comming. And what better way to end a cartoon then to see a man kick his daughter in the face?

All in all, it wasn't some amazing piece of work that will live on in our hearts and minds until the end of time, but it was a pretty damn funny flash which I honestly think deserves its front page status.

~Tovi~

Oney responds:

thank you tovi :)

[super happy fun life]

Kind Of Boring.

I just don't get it. Maybe I'm not artsy enough?

Pretty sure there was a subliminal message in there somewhere, too.

Either way, it gave me motion sickness. Song was kinda cool, though.

~Tovi~

Mechabloby responds:

you trample the graves of dead children

[Mario vs Bills]

Not Bad!

It wasn't the funniest thing it the world, but it was very original, even if I did kind've see it comming (except for the Koopa with the cannon, that you totally got me with).

Good work!

~Tovi~

Ghoulishtie responds:

Ive tried making a 2nd one that was starting to seem VERY improved, but the one thing that gets me, is background. I try to line them up to make them 'loop' in a way, but they dissapear.....

anyway thanks.