Score: 4

"Bad Dog. No Biscuit."

submission: Its Peanut Mario Jelly

date: January 15, 2009

I was really hoping this fad had finally died and gone to hell where it belongs...

Regardless, this was actually still pretty humorous. Much better than a banana, but still not quite as good as a stick figure battle.

~Tovi~

Score: 6

"Gets The Point Across."

submission: The five pillars

date: January 12, 2009

The Kajj or whatever sounds like a sexual position. Or maybe a drug...

Anyway, very informative. There were a few parts where the audio got too quiet to hear very well, and the animation could have used some work (as could the drawings of the people) but all in all, it was a decent flash. Also, nice work adding subtitles. It made everything far less confusing.

I'm sure your school project went very well.

3/5

~Tovi~

Score: 9

"Woah."

submission: Better Off Dreaming

date: January 10, 2009

Holy.

Shit.

That was literally the LAST thing I expected. Dude. That was fucking epic. I just figured it was another crap-ass animation with a bunch of stolen sprites that had nothing to do with anything.

Luckily, I was wrong.

Keep up the good work!

~Tovi~

Score: 6

"Haha."

submission: Bowja From His Cashle

date: January 7, 2009

I can't understand why people can find shit like "B" to be hilarious, but don't think this is remotely funny.

This isn't exactly the single greatest thing I've ever seen, and it did get a bit annoying after a while, but it served its purpose at making me laugh pretty hard for at least the first 30 seconds or so.

Decent work!

~Tovi~

Score: 7

"Pretty Good."

submission: The Dungeons and Dragons

date: January 2, 2009

An interesting cartoon, pretty clever.

My only complaint is that sometimes it's hard to tell exactly who's talking, since none of the characters have mouths. It's an interesting way to go about drawing characters, I suppose, but they should at least have little lines shooting out from where their mouths are or something, so we can tell who's who without having to look and see who's eyes happen to be moving at the time.

Other than that, good animation. A bit choppy (not the fault of the quality), but still good.

Keep up the good work!

~Tovi~

Score: 10

"Nice!"

submission: Renegade Awesome Episode2

date: December 27, 2008

I had honestly not seen the first one, but I'll definitely be watching it after this.

You, sir, have quite a talent. This is one of the funniest flashes I've seen in a long time, and I can only hope that you continue to do more. It was very original, it was neither too long nor too short, it never stopped being entertaining... honestly, it reminded me a lot of old school Family Guy, but in a smaller, flash... ier... sort of way.

Keep up the good work. I wouldn't change a thing.

~Tovi~

Score: 5

"Kind've Boring..."

submission: An Easter Bunny Story

date: December 12, 2008

There's really a whole lot of nothing going on with this flash.

I mean, the game's idea is pretty cool, but it takes forever before you're able to do ANYTHING. You have to wait for the bunny to talk for what seems like 10 minutes before you can even start choosing to do anything, and then when you finally CAN choose to do something, you pick it, and then wait another minute or two for the bunny to whine about being cold, hungry, alone, etc. before finally being able to select the next option.

The sentences either need to be WAY shorter and move on a little bit faster, or there needs to be a way to just click to cycle to the next line of text.

The music is pretty cool, the story is unique, but the long and frequent bunny-talk gets old fast, and really pulled me away from playing this for more than a few minutes (which doesn't get you nearly as far as you'd think it would).

~Tovi~

Score: 3

"Concider Re-Submitting."

submission: Exam Troubles

date: December 10, 2008

The graphics are nifty, and the idea is fine, but the actually carrying it out... well, it sucked.

I teacher does the same thing each time through, making it horrifically easy to cheat off of the other students.

The animation is all the same, and the only thing that changes throughout each level of gameplay is the amount of students that you need to cheat off of, until the unclimactic end where you cheat off of every student in the room (which is only about as difficult as the first level). The music gets old FAST, as does the repeating animation and the general repetitive gameplay.

I would suggest making later levels more intense by changing the patern the teacher walks in, maybe adding another teacher for the last level or two, or even making some of the students start realizing that someone is cheating off of their papers.

Overall, the concept is cool, but it was carried out as a mediocre flash.

~Tovi~

Score: 5

"Spelling Error That You Probably Know About By Now"

submission: Cheesio Vs Mooigi Trailer

date: December 3, 2008

I would recommend spelling "imagine" correctly... kind of makes this look really bad seeing "emagine" come across the screen.

I love the fact that the music is so epic sounding, though. It makes you feel as though these two are fighting for something life changing... something whimsical... something... more than a penny, haha.

It was pretty funny. Look forward to seeing it.

~Tovi~

Score: 7

"Okay."

submission: NG Office Adventure v1.3

date: November 4, 2008

The only challenge I just couldn't seem to get was the one where you have to do it in under 60 seconds. My record was 1:11. I was, however, able to get it in 79 clicks after the first few tries of getting like 81 and such.

Decent game, fairly humorous. The challenges added to the fun of the game, which was nice.

~Tovi~